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Alexander Averin

Sunday, 21 July 2013

Control

 

 


Control

 
He was the puppeteer, she the marionette.  He was handsome,

she hung on his words, ensnared by their candour.

He brought flowers, seemed earnest in his ardour,
He was manipulative, she was submissive.
She should have listened to mother, who said
never trust a man who will not meet your eye.
She laughed it off, far too soft,
down to her very last curl.
The puppeteer was a plotter in control,

soon she became his puppet, 

tried and tested to a high specification.
Rows ensued if she broke down, became loose,

disengaged or tried to break away.
One day huge cracks appeared;  a split  occurred,
She finally snapped and when they became uncoupled,

he was shriven, spiteful, selfish.
Instead of crumbling, she was dignified,
she forgave and wished him well,
before she left him, more in sorrow than anger.

 

Cait O’Connor

 

 

 

 

5 comments:

Mac n' Janet said...

We've all known someone like that haven't we. Strong, evocative poem.

Pam said...

Ooooo-rather good! In fact, damn excellent.

Mary said...

Excellent!! I can picture these two. She was a 'bigger person' than I would have been when she wished him well!! I'd forgive, but draw the line at that.

(Thanks for the visit today...and right now I mainly write poetry, though I have written fiction in the past!)

Dave King said...

A good idea, nicely contrived, beautifully drawn and very moving. Well done.

Friko said...

Yes, true to life in many ways.

Well expressed, without sentimentality or anger.