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Sunday, 29 June 2014
A Game of Patience
A Game of Patience, 1937, Meredith Frampton
Dressed in blue-stocking grey, to match the sharpness
of her intellect, Margaret Austin-Jones
sits alone in solitary pursuit.
Her eyes deep hazel, her hair sweet chestnut,
crimped in waves so neat and precise they match her
manner and the cut of her dress, (modern,
Vogue-patterned, made for her with care).
Although she's up-to-date, she is but
young and wise in every way but love.
Like Eve she yearns too much for life, desires
to taste the apple, touch the texture of
the ears of corn, impatient for the blood-
red buds to bloom. She hears a footfall on
the stair, her heartbeat pounds, she glances at
the door. Like a scene from a novel, in
a room with a view, the dramatic part
has come; she has played a patient game of
waiting for a suitor to appear, has
craved and dreamed herself a handsome, kindly
knave but little knows she may have drawn instead
a darkly evil, scheming, King of Spades.
Cait O’Connor
This is Sunday's Magpie Tale, read others here
You've painted a delicate picture.
ReplyDeleteKing of spades... she better be careful with that one! He sounds like trouble! Great poem!
ReplyDeletei wish her luck
ReplyDeletei wish her luck
ReplyDeleteI really like this one, Cate.
ReplyDeleteI can relate.
ReplyDeleteI never trusted those card monarch's - Jack of hearts used to deal kindly way back!
ReplyDeleteOoooow!
ReplyDeleteA king of spades!!
Well lady go for it - just this once! - it might just put a smile on your face!
She looks as though there is MUCH more on her mind than clock patience.
Loved this poem very much Cait and your thinking is not too dissimilar to mine, just posted. ~ Eddie
I like your close attention to the picture. My favorite part:
ReplyDeleteLike Eve she yearns too much for life, desires
to taste the apple, touch the texture of
the ears of corn, impatient for the blood-
red buds to bloom.
Delicious description, I adore you waves of her hair! Yes, life is about living with patience!
ReplyDeleteexcellent and suspenseful!
ReplyDeleteI love the way you placed the picture-poem in the correct time zone with your words. :-)
ReplyDeleteBrilliant! And using the King of Spades was the master stroke!
ReplyDeleteAh, tis not the game of singles solitaire she should be playing, but the game of 'life' itself. Sometimes one must get past the knaves and the king of spades to find the king of hearts, their 'ace in the hole!' A lovely and descriptive story you have woven here, I really enjoyed it!
ReplyDeleteWell told, Cait. I wish the lady will have courage to trade her card game for intrigues with very unpredictable destinations.
ReplyDeletexo
Love the poem and images you portrayed. I like that you put a name the lady, making her seem more alive. The reference to Eve was perfect.
ReplyDeleteIs that you on the left? :-)
ReplyDeleteCouldn't be more unlike me Berowne!
ReplyDeleteCait, this is WONDERFUL
ReplyDeletea positive short story in a poem.
I wonder what happens next?
What acute observation of the picture and what wonderful links...room with a view etc.
A bravura performance.
Gosh - loved it.
Am finally working on a post about why I write.....
several months late!
Wow ... that last line ... too good :-)
ReplyDeleteI think verse and brush go hand in hand in this poem. :-)
ReplyDeleteGreetings from London.
Astute observations and masterful descriptions. Wonderful! What an interesting meme. Must pass it along to another poet friend I know.
ReplyDeleteShe yearns too much for life, desires..temptation lingers..
ReplyDeleteLove how patiently you're drawing her portrait. But too innocent...she can draw some negative attention...~ nice fit for the picture.
ReplyDeleteOkay. This one is perfect.
ReplyDelete=)
ReplyDeleteA great descriptive piece of writing Cait. The King of Spades ...emmm ...sounds like it won't be a happy ending for us romantics! Well written.
This is absolutely fabulous. I love, love, love it. You have prompted me to write something more than lists today. Thank you.
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