When love is not madness, it is not love.
Pedro Calderon de la Barca
I was leafing through a Country Life magazine in the library in my lunch hour yesterday as there are often interesting snippets in it. I have discovered an artist I had not come across called Arthur Hacker, (1858-1919). I expect you all know of him but my education is often sadly lacking. I have picked one of his pictures to illustrate a wee poem about Valentine's Day. It is a bleak poem which is about love but not the happiest aspects of it so I am posting it before Monday when I expect the day to be a happy one, full of Cupids, arrows, soft nothings and anonymous messages of love.
Vale of Farewell
Arthur Hacker
The idea for this poem came to me when I was driving. It is a true story, based on real people who shall obviously have to remain anonymous.
Crazy Valentine
He has lost his wife.
Some folk said he should have been more careful,
that the cause was his neglect.
He swore she was not lost,
that he had just mislaid her
but now she lays with another.
He lives a solitary life now
in their longhouse below a Welsh mountain.
Memories of their sweet union still hang around the yard.
Even the hills are sexy, their curves seem way too beautiful;
symmetrical, symbolic, their view from the cottage
both attract and pain him in equal measure.
He has joined a dating site and goes on nervous assignations
but the women all seem coarse and not remotely like his wife,
the one he swears is calling to him from some secret place.
She is still arty, awash with sweetness and a cool allure
which he knows can quickly sway according to that moody moon.
He looks out for her in special hope upon the feast of Valentine.
Sometimes she is dominant and close,
sometimes distant, hidden and reserved.
but he believes that she is there and that she calls to him alone,
that she is waiting for the moment to return
that life will return to normal
and that everything will be the way it always used to be,
before he had woefully mislaid her.
Cait O’Connor
Such a beautiful poem.
ReplyDeleteWishing you a lovely Valentine's Day.
Inspiration is everywhere.
My inspiration comes much like yours, it seems. Often at night, usually just after retiring or immediately upon waking, though either of these will usually be after having given some thought or done some work on it during the day. The shower is another area.
ReplyDeleteSad and very moving. Inspiration comes out of the blue at times, hard to pinpoint.
ReplyDeleteMy ideas for poems usually come after sitting down and "going inside" for a while, often after a walk in nature.
ReplyDeleteI really like the sad image of him mislaying his wife, out of thoughtlessness and neglect, taking her for granted. I also like the way the landscape is her body.
Well that one's going to linger in my memory, I love the idea of him mislaying his wife! I think a number of men do that without even knowing it.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful, Cait. I like its unexpectedness. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteI've been mislaid a few times myself--one generally tends not to come back, I think, to those who are so careless. I enjoyed your words, and their picture of the Welsh hills and human heart.
ReplyDeleteI have scraps all over the place, and three different notebooks big and small. The hardest ones are those that come in the middle of the night, sometimes whole long ones, andif I don't get up and write, they are 'mislaid' forever.
what a wonderful yet sad idea with him mislaying his wife - unusual and beautifully crafted
ReplyDelete"Even the hills are sexy, their curves seem way too beautiful;
ReplyDeletesymmetrical, symbolic, their view from the cottage both attract and pain him in equal measure."
this is an amazing stanza in the midst of a really terrific poem. Thank you!
I love the image of driving through the Welsh countryside going down the wrong lane because I am trying to find a piece of paper. I have written poems half asleep; in the mornings it is beautiful illegible chicken scratch.
ReplyDeleteA sad tale of a man who could have done better with love
thanks for sharing with One Stop - I'm standing in for my mate Pete - hope you can hear the accent all the same
Cheers
You've painted a picture that will now stay in my mind. It encompasses the Welsh landscape that I love so much. Thank you Cait for your perceptive, beautiful quiet and poetic creation.
ReplyDeleteYour poem made me laugh. I enjoyed it so much. I'm very glad I followed you here from Gigi's place. It's so nice to meet you.
ReplyDeleteHello Cait,
ReplyDeleteA very very moving Poem Cait, thank you for sharing with us.
I am one of those people who have snippets and bits of paper all over the place.! I have a blank paged hardback book that I have entered some of my written Poems in, some too scribbled down in other note books.
I was only just thinking to myself this morning Cait of the Country Life Magazine which I have here, fancy that.!
xx
beautiful poem. come to think of it, i find that is a story not often told, someone finding the right one and losing her because he did not take care...
ReplyDeletebeautifully written.
Maybe he staked her at cards and lost her that way; at any rate he should at least look for her instead of bemoaning his lot. Still a very beautiful poem, Cait. Like all your poems. Full of longing, hiraeth even.
ReplyDeleteCait what a lovely poem, with fantastic imagery your words capture the situation so well. I find I get creative bursts and then just have to grab a pen or brush as I can. It is funny how inspiration and creativity seem to come in bursts, it doesn't just flow smoothly all the time, but the clarity of the moment when it is there is superb.
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What a sad poem.. he mislaid her, no she lays wit another. I know people how are getting mislaid...sad.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful writing, Cait.
I think inspiration comes when we are not in the doing, when our minds are relatively quiet. Like the shower. Lately, mine comes when I am just waking up and before I am out of bed. In that quiet space, much gets presented. I just need to remember the pen!
Happy Valentine's Day!
So beautiful - you've put that terrible regret into words.
ReplyDeleteIt's tough being alone, but particularly so on Valentine's day, if you don't have the resources to be okay alone.
ReplyDeleteLovely clear poem.
Ah poor man! Longing for the already departed one. A woman freed doesn't look back does she?!
ReplyDeleteHappy Valentine's to you dear Cait. lots of softened with chocolate candy heart arrows whizzing your way...
I have lines of poetry come to me anywhere at all, and I scrabble for a pen! Because of course if I don't get to tranfer the words quickly they stick their tongues out at me and whizz off to you, or Ruth or Terresa or well, the other Poets :) Have you seen this TED talk by Elizabeth Gilbert? It is one of the most brilliantly compassionate things you will hear about Inspiration, the Muse and writing...(aside from Rilke's Letters).
http://www.ted.com/index.php/talks/elizabeth_gilbert_on_genius.html
What wonderful words, sad that they are. Lovely poem and beautifully written.
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