From a Train, Lightly
Sentinel trees hold sway
standing watch through back-lit mists
across the anonymous valley.
Emerging from the white fog
the outline of a black farmhouse,
I am half expecting
a troubled Cathy or
an emotionally disturbed Heathcliffe
to emerge from the door.
The unseen river
divulges its presence
by a meandering, fluid cloud
of pale grey.
Flat flood-mirrors
grip leafless trees against
a pink-silver streaked sky
as the rumour of a sun becomes clear.
Dawn, ageless beauty, exits
a la droit
as startled sheep again scatter
from the nant’s edge.
We are speeding now towards the light
still hidden by the ubiquitous hills.
A lonely, lost heron mistakes a puddle
for a breakfast pond.
©Christopher Challener December 2009
Lovely...
ReplyDeleteThank you, Cait.
ReplyDeleteI read the poems three times through, and liked it better each time.
Now, my mind is bringing back to me many views I have had through train windows in many parts of the world. In day and night, so many fleeting views are captured in a second.
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Lovely descriptive words to the wonderful Poem Cait, thank you for sharing with us.
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The poet is completely new to me. Do you know anything about him?
ReplyDeleteI find this poem very evocative, with beautiful imagery.
Cait, I see that you have me in your bloglist; would you mind following me on my blog too, please. Clicking the Google Friend Connect button would do it.
A poem referencing Wuthering Heights? Wonderful :)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful - and a new poem to me.
ReplyDeleteHappy New Year to you and yours, cait. Cx
I love that delicious rythmn one feels when looking out of ttrain windows - poetry compliments it perfectly!
ReplyDeleteLovely poem; thanks so much for sharing (I don't know the poet, either.)
ReplyDeleteHappy New Year, Cait! All good things to you.
Happy New Year Cait! I was so glad to read your good news - what a lovely way to start out 2010.
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